Glossary entry (derived from question below)
German term or phrase:
hat Herr X im Systems Engineering und später im operationellen Betrieb kritischen IT-Projekten mit grossem Engagement zum Erfolg verholfen.
English translation:
Mr.X has with great dedication seen mission-critical IT projects through to success first in systems engineering, and later in
German term
***im operationellen Betrieb kritischen***
Thanks.
Best regards,
Sebastian
3 +1 | at the operational end | gangels (X) |
3 | at operational level | Michael Martin, MA |
Mar 12, 2014 19:09: Sebastian Witte changed "Edited KOG entry" from "<a href="/profile/60654">Sebastian Witte's</a> old entry - "hat Herr X im Systems Engineering und später im operationellen Betrieb kritischen IT-Projekten mit grossem Engagement zum Erfolg verholfen. "" to ""has with great dedication seen mission-critical IT projects through to success first in systems engineering, and later in ""
Proposed translations
at the operational end
at operational level
My take:
'With great dedication, Mr. X has seen critical projects through to success as a project and section manager - initially at a systems engineering and later at operational level.'
Discussion
Schau dir bitte den eingesternten Teil nochmal in Ruhe an, hinterher wenn du Zeit hast. Es handelt sich m.E. um ganz u. gar regelgerechtes Deutsch, einschließlich der Verwendung von "kritisch" -- nur stilistisch ist dieser Teil etwas unglücklich (von der Wortstellung her).
As Project Manager and Unit Manager, Mr. X can, due to his great dedication, look back on a solid track record in Systems Engineering and subsequently in helping resource-critical live operation IT projects take off.