Apr 27, 2005 07:40
19 yrs ago
English term

"Pork and beans musical fruit, The more you eat the more you toot!

English to Serbian Art/Literary Poetry & Literature literary work - novel
Pojasnjenja radi, ovo je odlomak iz knjige u kojoj se nalazi taj stih:

"Then they would have me to lunch, which was always the same thing, pork and beans and canned pineapple for dessert. At the beginning the father would say the Grace, "For what we are about to receive may the Lord make us truly thankful, Amen', while the four children pinched and kicked each other under the table; and at the end he would say:
Pork and beans the musical fruit,
The more you eat the more you toot.
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Interesuje me da li neko ima kakvu ideju o tome kako bi se ovaj stih mogao prevesti, da ostane stih, a i da bude u vezi sa jelom koje je posluzeno.

Moja ideja je bila: "Pazi brale kada jedes sira, jer od sira dupe ce da svira."
ali mi se to ne uklapa u kontekst ovog pasulja koji je posluzen.
Ili da jednostavno dodam (posto se radi o literarnom prevodu) da je za rucak bio sluzen pasulj sa svinjetinom i sir (da im jednostavno dodam i sir na trpezu)?
Da li ima neka slicna stihovna kombinacija sa pasuljom (grahom), kao sto je to slucaj sa sirom?

Proposed translations

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vidi dole

Rebarca i pasulj, plod uzitka
sto vise jedes to veca svirka

ili nesto sto se bas skroz rimuje:-)

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Note added at 17 mins (2005-04-27 07:58:07 GMT)
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ili: to bolja svirka
Peer comment(s):

agree Marija Vujosevic Caric : Odlično! Mislim da bi se još malo bolje slagalo da dodamo "plod su užitka" i "to je veća svirka"
2 hrs
e da, ima vise ritma! Hvala:-)
agree Miomira Brankovic : Čestitke sa zakašnjenjem na duhovitom i vrlo prikladnom prevodu.
1 day 8 hrs
puno hvala - ovo su zapravo moji omiljeni prevodi:-)
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Hvala na pomoci, dvije Marije!"
6 days
English term (edited): Beans

nastavak pesme

Veoma mi se dopada prevod, ali sale radi, ja znam i nastavak pesmice:
"... the more you toot,
the better you feel,
so lets have beans for every meal!"
Uzivajte!
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